This may be just me, but the term "soul mate" is thrown around a lot. I know it can mean different things to different people, but it's very vague. I think that term has left a bad taste in my mouth, being divorced too :)
In the paragraph where Nica is describing her sexual encounters with other men to Jeremy, maybe explore more why it hurt Jeremy's feelings when she did this? I can see where it would cause Jeremy to question himself (that he is not enough for her) and reduces his self confidence.
This may be just me, but the term "soul mate" is thrown around a lot. I know it can mean different things to different people, but it's very vague. I think that term has left a bad taste in my mouth, being divorced too :)
In the paragraph where Nica is describing her sexual encounters with other men to Jeremy, maybe explore more why it hurt Jeremy's feelings when she did this? I can see where it would cause Jeremy to question himself (that he is not enough for her) and reduces his self confidence.